I liked it Dean! 
It goes by too fast for me to pick out any problems - sure, stepping forward one frame at a time, you might see something we can't,  we all see our own faults because we're so focussed on it.   But in the context of the whole ad it works great and made me laugh.  Congrats on getting it done.
That leaves only Fred that we don't know about.  The last time he posted he was saying any segment was ok with him, he hasn't actually confirmed that he is doing the 28 to 32 second slot.  The voiceover says "as part of the Live Show at 8 pm central, on the last Wednesday of..." so maybe a screen capture of the live show page, with ScottDaros's piano player clip showing in the video window, would cover that bit nicely if Fred hasn't done it? 
Hello Fred?  You there?

Hey, I just noticed the calendar in Nederer's clip  (32 - 36 sec) says Thursday 29th- well, it's always on Thursdays for me in Australia.

Great videos everyone! I will edit them together soon. I can download all the films for editing on YouTube but I can't download them off Vimeo. So Tim, Jahnocli and Nederer will need to e-mail me your videos, upload them to YouTube or to a server for downloading. Once I've got those I can wrap it all together. Also make sure to check out the new thread I started on how we go about the next monthly challenge.

Looks great Matt! It's very clean.

Oh, I forgot you were downloading the videos. I wanted to change my You Tube username, but the only way you can do it is by deleting your account and starting a new one. Pain in the butt!

I'll upload the video again. I'll be 5 minutes.

Right, I uploaded it to my new channel : http://youtu.be/K5_JfHeusaM

It's half a second short of the 4 second dialogue, I don't know if you can slot something in there? It's a bit of a mess, really 

Hi Marc, there should be an actual download button on my Vimeo page that will allow you to download the source video. Ive enabled it in the settings.